False Vision
It was all a dream
But nobody believes me
Oh no, my brother.
Runaway Love
This was all my fault. I could have stayed but i chose to leave. Now sadly, according to his fate he must die.
POV: The vantage point of stance, from which the story is told, the eye and mind through which the action is perceived and filtered.
POV: The vantage point of stance, from which the story is told, the eye and mind through which the action is perceived and filtered.
Fantastic titles!
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This was all my fault. I could have stayed but I chose to leave. Now sadly,according to his fate he must die.
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